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Well, there you have it. DUN DUN DUUUNN! Weee! 
A few things. The dialogue: meh. I don't think Zack actually gives a shit about cowardice. She's just there to have fun and kickass. Maybe I'll revamp it if I find a better way. Also, it seems a bit rushed, no? Furthermore, is it clear what happened? I'm not sure if it's explained very well. Keep in mind what Mash was holding onto when he boob-kicked Zack. Lastly: hey wait....Zack already died 200 years ago....how could she die again now? TIME FOR SOME BS EXPLAINATION! She didn't just die, because she can't, but her host body is too weak to do anything further until she heals up. Totally BS, I know.
Enjoyable round. Good competition. All is awesome in the world.
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..........never again.
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Mash: Me
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A few things. The dialogue: meh. I don't think Zack actually gives a shit about cowardice. She's just there to have fun and kickass. Maybe I'll revamp it if I find a better way. Also, it seems a bit rushed, no? Furthermore, is it clear what happened? I'm not sure if it's explained very well. Keep in mind what Mash was holding onto when he boob-kicked Zack. Lastly: hey wait....Zack already died 200 years ago....how could she die again now? TIME FOR SOME BS EXPLAINATION! She didn't just die, because she can't, but her host body is too weak to do anything further until she heals up. Totally BS, I know.
Enjoyable round. Good competition. All is awesome in the world.
.......
..........never again.
Next: [link]
Prev: [link]
Mash: Me
Zack:
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My opinion mirrors ~spiremint and ~Kalyn-Palak. CURSE YOU AND ~Bored-dood FOR YOUR...YOUR...AWESOMENESS. 